Is Laughter a good thing? comments, critiques welcome...?
he tickled me
deep inside
his voice like
the rolling thunder
but I don't shudder
with the sound
no, laughter abounds
as he talks and makes me laugh
I laugh until I have streams
of tears pouring down my face
could it be, he likes me this way
with laughter in my voice?
hm
just a little something that spurred to my brain...
O.M.G........you laughing would just make me insane ,...i mean crazy horny.......nuts ...i love women laughing ...sexiest .......oh ...unreal...
Laughter is medicine to my state of being
that and our proverbial dancing.. I can't tell my right from my left foot in reality, a bit of a spaz but when you and I get together.. we can tear up a dance floor like nobody else..
and let me tell you.. that rolling thunder voice
gets me every time.. It is the most gentle thing I have ever heard...and my smiles make his face light up like the night sky with lightening flashing..
that and our proverbial dancing.. I can't tell my right from my left foot in reality, a bit of a spaz but when you and I get together.. we can tear up a dance floor like nobody else..
and let me tell you.. that rolling thunder voice
gets me every time.. It is the most gentle thing I have ever heard...and my smiles make his face light up like the night sky with lightening flashing..
Laughter is always music to my ears. It always feel so good to have a good laugh. I like your poem, Sandy. I brought a smile to my face. Thanks.
0 yes laughter is the best medicine, to be sure.
Nice pen, iffy last line..............
could it be, my roaring laughter
suits his rolling thunder to a tee.
or some such, but it's your pen not mine.
Nice pen, iffy last line..............
could it be, my roaring laughter
suits his rolling thunder to a tee.
or some such, but it's your pen not mine.
I think 'jolly' comes to mind. Keep practicing...try writing something sad.
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as someone said you can't spell slaughter without laughter, so yes it's good thing
yes and I'm laughing all the way
and crying is healthy
especially when they are happy tears!
and crying is healthy
especially when they are happy tears!
Well of course, especially at a time like this...
Duh
hurumphhh...I see the Keebler Elf is on the loose again